Cuttlefish

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my progress



lineart

comments and intense critique very very much appreciated.

[madster]

It's off to a good start, but you really don't have enough completed to say much more, beyond the usual "Keep it up, dude, looking good!"...

~M

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Damn dude, i've read some of your other replies, and you're brutal. I hope to get some serious crit from you in the future.

[madster]

Give me something to form a decent opinon about! I like the blues, and the white dots that will eventually become suckers are okay...but other than that, I'm lookin' at this and it's like, what? WHAT? There's not enough to judge. The drawing is okay, but it's nothing like a comp for the current work.

I look forward to seeing this turn into something, but can't say much until it does...

I will suggest you do a web search and get some ref pictures, especially for the eye. That dumbbell shaped lens looks goofy.


~M

Now that I think about it, this ain't even a cuttlefish!
It's a stinkin' SQUID!!!!
Damn dude! Get your shellfish straight!
(That harsh enough for ya? )