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Old April 28th, 2005, 11:31 AM
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WarShy's Pics - Blooming Flowers in Spring

Everythings just blooming outside so I decided to take some pics. Tell me what you think.

its that time again! Can you spot my clone stamping?


Same Tree, Different Angle


Its a shame that little house thing is in the shot


Almost as white as a KKK meeting




its a bit blurry in the middle


Me approaching my neighbor's yard


Me in my neighbor's yard




A view outside my bedroom window
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haha feel the love man

i really enjoy the white trees, i guess they're white b/c flowers?

i think they would all benefit from a bit of a color balance and contrast correction, but otherwise good material

that last one is my favorite by far
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Its a good start, but you have many things to improve on. Mainly composition. In the shot with the white trees you have no real subject to focus on.. the trees frame in a piece of blue sky. Try to shoose just one subject or the shots will usually get too busy, too many things to focus on. Still subjects like trees dont move, so take your time to compose the shot. The shot with the big yellow flower is the best. You have a good clear subject and pretty good composition. You could try to get better light, sunlight is always nice. One thing you could try is to take photos of the same subject in the morning, day, evening or night and see how the subject gets different moods because of the light.
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In the last picture there is some water reflecting gold, I think maybe if you crop around that area while adding maybe the pink flowers coming in from the side or something it could be a nice pic, the trees are very beautiful
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