Bring on the crits

[The Blurukus]

Tell me what you think?

[Nezumi Works]

Well, the jaw makes no sense at all. If he closes his mouth, the top teeth will hit the sides of the bottom teeth, which really doesn't make him much of a threat. The neck is a bit of a mess too, I can't really make out the structure. Same goes for the back of the head, it doesn't seem to have structure at all.

And neckbeards are the official style of hardcore Unix hackers. XD

[The Blurukus]

Originally Posted by Nezumi Works

Well, the jaw makes no sense at all. If he closes his mouth, the top teeth will hit the sides of the bottom teeth, which really doesn't make him much of a threat. The neck is a bit of a mess too, I can't really make out the structure. Same goes for the back of the head, it doesn't seem to have structure at all.

And neckbeards are the official style of hardcore Unix hackers. XD

I just wanna make a few points. He doesn't necessarily bite anything and he has no chin (which kinda explains the rolls on his neck). This is also a random sketch I made. I just wanted to colour it out to see how it would look. Thanks for your input, though. Will be sure to keep that in mind.

It's also incomplete which is why the back of his head looks like that.

[Kitpup]

Originally Posted by The Blurukus

I just wanna make a few points. He doesn't necessarily bite anything and he has no chin (which kinda explains the rolls on his neck). This is also a random sketch I made. I just wanted to colour it out to see how it would look. Thanks for your input, though. Will be sure to keep that in mind.

It's also incomplete which is why the back of his head looks like that.

Stick your jaw out and give yourself a massive underbite like he's got. Try to eat. S'not gonna work.

The transition from the folding, flopping skin to the tight, taut skin is... awkward and makes it look like a separate, wrinkly head tacked on to a muscular body. There's just no cohesion between the two and it took me almost a full minute to realize what I was looking at.

[Marlo]

try not to shade with black, it has a habit of making drawings flat.

also.. the hair is very akward.

[The Blurukus]

Originally Posted by Kitpup

Stick your jaw out and give yourself a massive underbite like he's got. Try to eat. S'not gonna work.

The transition from the folding, flopping skin to the tight, taut skin is... awkward and makes it look like a separate, wrinkly head tacked on to a muscular body. There's just no cohesion between the two and it took me almost a full minute to realize what I was looking at.

Yeah I figured that much after Nezumi pointed it out. Thanks for the crit. How about the lighting? is there anything off on that?