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#1
November 5th, 2009, 11:02 PM
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What needs improvement... Critique much appreciated
Let me know what you guys think of this piece and how to improve it...
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#2
November 6th, 2009, 06:25 AM
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Her breasts seem too huge to support, and her torso looks really small compared to it.
Also, more sharpness in the picture could help? it feels blurry
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#3
November 6th, 2009, 08:44 AM
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The hair looks extremely flat. Give it some 3-dimensionality like you have done with the rest of the anatomy.
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#4
November 6th, 2009, 09:06 AM
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Watch your draw through. Some of those bandages look like they don't wrap around the back.
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