I don't know, when I look in tree crowns with my eyes it's usually a lot more dazzling than in the photograph. Anyways, still even there in the spots with blue sky behind still shines through a lot brighter than in the picture.
Well the composition leads to the king, and he isn't really popping out a lot right now. That's why I think brighter light could solve it overall, since the holes between those leaves could cast some more intense light reflections on him too. But anyways it's up to you, see it as a suggestion, you've been pushing this picture really far already anyways.That leaves making the leaves and branches darker, but I can't make them that much darker than the figures underneath (though I might still get away with darkening the leaves some)