ok, this is like the most amazing thread I've ever found in my life.
You guys I am way super confused about how to proceed with this painting and it might go up on a wall in a rather public place soon.
its subject matter is landscape/Google street view; I want to incorporate street view in some way and have been using screenshots. ANyway. HELP and CRITIQUE MOST BRUTALLY, PLEASE!
It is really hard to critque this. It depends on the style you are going for. However I do think that defining the edges more would help. It is a little blurry. Some rim lights, reflected lights, and values adjustment couldn't hurt either. I hope this helps.
This is for Critique Center, there's much more people over there that can help you. I'm not too much into classic painting but the value separation rule is applied in this technique too and your paint is not value separated, this is making it hard to read.