Hey so, I'm working on a new project for class this wednesday and I was wondering if you guys would give me some helpful critiques about my comps! These are not finished pieces, just pencil lines with quick photoshop colors. The final would be ink/watercolor on board. What are your thoughts? Also, it's a vignette format. that's the only requirement.
On the first image I plan to change the hair to make it less Dragonball z-ish -.- more fluid, spread out. (it bugs me sooo much now that I made that connection! LOL!)
On the second i also got the suggestion of making the hair a bit more fluid, more gaps, which I thought was a good thing to do.
Simple vignettes really. Position changes, anything to make it better. More interesting.