Up until now I've been hesitant to post any of my work on here, but today I remembered that nobody ever got anything done by being a pussy. Having just turned seventeen last month, I'm probably a few years younger than most of you and a lot less experienced, but I'd be stupid not to take advantage of all the things you guys can teach me. And you don't seem like the type of people who'd be vicious with critiques... So please, give me your opinions. What do I need to improve on?