The first ones look cool.
The Jedi ones look unfinished and too blurry in my opinion. There is no focus other than the lightsaber (because of the intensity of the color)
I like the obiwan kenobi though, I think that if you were to work more on it it would look awesome
Hi there, just found your post while scanning through the artworks here at concept art. I must say that the concept characters you made for your graphic novel are great. They look so realistic. I like Felix Culpa as well as Vera Jasper (I hope they're both protagonists). Anyway, I'm looking forward to see more of your concept arts and I hope to read your graphic novel once it's done. Thanks for sharing!
Hi there, first time on the site; just browsing through and i happened to stumble across this post. Simply amazing, the first set are absolutely incredible, love the attention to detail here and how each character's ensemble coincides with their "class" or weapon choice if you will. As for the Star Wars artwork; simply fascinating, i love the effects and textures used here to create a truly unique and well defined set of images, keep up the good work!
Thank you for your constructive criticism. I've noticed that you are quite a valued member of this community, frequently lavishing your sagacious and inspiring prose on fellow aspiring artists. I am confident that all of us here at ConceptArt.org can benefit from your insightful input.