Rescently, I uploaded my newest short film made entirely by myself in Maya.
Check it out and tell me what you guys think.
Hmmm the animation of the looks fine except when it jumps from the cliff...you have given an anticipation that prepares people for a huge jump but instead it just drops down like i just disappeared. On all the other fronts...good work m8...
Ah that’s cute! The weight shifts are too few and a bit too stiff. Don’t hesitate to move your character’s feet around as we tend to do that constantly. Take yourself as a reference and you’ll notice
Nice facial expression on your protagonist there, but you could’ve pushed his emotion in his body language furthermore, even in a tight shot. The body’s your foundation and the face the confirmation, exaggeration or lie of what the character is feeling/expressing.
Can’t wait for the next!
thanks guys, i see what you are saying, great crits
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