Last edited by pbgse; February 23rd, 2008 at 07:38 AM.
Nice welcome you got :p
His posture is very cramped. Turtleheadcramped.maybe give his legs another posture. His hands are very nice though. I really think you could work more on the shadows. Especially on his torso.
Post some more work so that it's possible to get a better sense of how you work.
Please take the time to give me some constructive criticism in my Sketchbook
Hilbruks thanks for crits i'm working on em and i'll post it tomorrow as it will be finished so problems are legs and torso - i changed the torso and now working on the legs - tx mate
and some of my stuff hope u like it
Your darks in the digitals are very close to black, this flattens out the dark areas a little, so if you can put a bit more colour and a slightly lighter value there instead, I think the images would gain a lot of depth.
Nice sketches! Liking the strokes and all the different character ideas.
I think your human proportions might need some work, but I'm only basing that off one image (the first one), so I might be wrong ^^
Keep it up!
NoŽ thanks and you're right it flattens allot and i'll keep that in mind . and yes i think the word here is depth so i'm working on it
thanks for stoping by
2 more i did today
oh and i made one study for the hell of it and photoshop broke on me
i'm making an ancient mage and from one to another it led me to doing this BUT problem is i want to put something in his right hand and i thought i should be something white and i hve no ideea what it'll be - need sugestions pls pls
hey thanks for stopping by my sb. really good stuff i like your characters although i think your cartoons are your strong points. i really like all the cartoon faces you did. keep it up.
oh yeah for the ancient mage, maybe a dead chicken....
To live is to create, to create is to live. Without art and music, I do not know how I would get by in my day to day life.
Exquisite Beast - mmm a white fang could be i'll keep that in mind - tx
thesadpencil - well mate glad u like the cartoons and yeah so just the chicken's head could do and somehow combine with the fang - thanks
and update i changed the pose and face
and this is what came up
Awesome stuff. I'm loving your style. I like the mage in the first pose, though. His right foot looks like it needs some work. Keep it up!
I'm only 15 and would like some comments/critiques/tips so CHECK OUT MY SKETCHBOOK! Please =] http://conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=117399
pfiuu another day gone by and still not being so productive as i wanted to be ... i'm curently painting and hoping to do an expo soon and well it's about couples and couple stuff i'll post one of em soon as i finish it
today v day and an idea ringed in my head so i made this wip - its about how i see love = per example 2 fish and in order to be togheter one of them has to leave its bawl to join the other - i feel each of us lives in a bawl in sea ... u can take it from here
ItalianHorsey- thanks for the advice
dude your stuff is nice post more
2kre8 - tx buddy i'll make it nicer ( or worst )
and here are some experiments i've tryn on some of went bad some of em even more bad so i just posted these
Flaskpost tx man
UnSharpened you're sb is cool so no problem yeap i do graffiti and i'll post some new stuff
Trashy thanks and glad u like it - and yes i'll do what NoŽ said , i promise
these are like 2 months old and i'll never post old stuff again
and this is new
uff tired for today
and hope to [ i m g ] better stuff soon [ / i m g ]
algenpfleger oh yeah color i use allot of color when i want to get away with something meaning details volumes etc tx for dropping by
flamable plain digital cause well its way more faster tx
Flaskpost oh yeah hehe i kinda like it too i think i'll go for a while trough this kind o direction tx
Clodioz hey tx and yeah maybe itll be best if i finished it but first i'm kinda experimenting stuff tx for lettin me know
ok so this is something i'm working on now - its concept design for some animated series ... i just started working yesterday i got this job
and right now i'm figuring out some characters - this one is the main one
i'll come with more details as soon as i get'em
Very good!! I like the way you mix the texture of paper and the colors with Photoshop. I hope you understand my bad English! Some of your drawings remind me a lovely comics, "Petit vampire"!
I really like your work!
5 steps of making something its the second character of the animation
Clochette thanks for dropping by and well those were study drawings meaning i had references comic books etc so if they remind of something then it could be but unfortunetly i dont have that comic u said , i'll search it and buy it thanks again
pfiu what a day
so today i had board meeting or brain storming meeting and it was AWESOME - for the animation - i love this job - i love this day - i wish i had more days like this one - i just hope to have more days like this one so i have to work harder
cheers guyz and well do animations its all worth it
Some of your drawings are excellent ,I especially love the cartoony one ,they have a great personality(hum) with some more work you'll be great so just keep it up!