I've been working on this piece for quite some hours now (not all together of course). I think there is something terribly wrong with it , but i've seen it so any times that i think i have lost the ability to see my mistakes.
Just so that you can have an idea, the little girl is asking this... creature to be his friend. Which is not normal since its somewhat repulsive.
So please, feel free to completely (but constructively ) destroy it with critique.