So, hereís the deal; ever since I got my first critique here, and had my eyes opened to great art, Iíve felt like everything Iíve drawn or painted has been some sort of failure because it didnít turn out perfectly like I wanted it to, and as a result, Iíve painted less and less each year (kept up the studies though), and wondered why Iím such a terrible artist. To make a long story short, a fellow student gave me a critique on my work last week, and mentioned that I was too hard on myself, and that I should look at my work objectively like I do everyone elseís work. Suddenly, Iíve found that I can draw fairly well, and while Iím still sort of in shock by this, and Iím still having a hard time figuring out how to be truly objective when Iím looking at my own work. In the image Iíve attached, I can nitpick and spot flaws until my eyes fall out. So, what Iím in need of is the opinions of people here. What issues do you think take away from the quality of this entire piece? Do I need to just leave it alone and move on or is there something that you think is a dire problem? Iím really sort of against a wall here.