I'm new to conceptart.org and I wanted some help on my portfolio.
I'm planning on submitting this portfolio to art center soon and plan to try for Otis later in the illustration major. I would like to get as much feedback and tips as I can.
So what can I improve on? Should I leave out some pieces?
I'd suggest leaving out most of the sketchbook pieces. Leave in the hands.
I think the color pieces are the weak area, but that's not entirely unexpected at your level, so I doubt they'd knock you too heavily for that. If you have time, maybe do a simpler color illustration or still life to add some strength back into that area.