I'm looking for some feedback on this drawing. I've been kicking around this idea for some time now and it won't get done until I pick up the pencil, right? After taking some photo references and doing a bunch of sketches, I didn't use any of that and just went with what was in my imagination. I kind of like it, but would be nice to see what others thought. Sorry for the two-tone look, I pieced two scans together and as I'm too computer savy, this is what came out. Hopefully that won't matter for what I'm looking for.
Now, what I would like to know:
1. Does the distortion and lack of perspective hurt this
2. Does the handle near the navigator's head look like it's sticking out of his mouth (is it noticable?)
3. anything else?
Thanks for any feedback. The plan is to do this as a painting and I just wanted to work out some kinks.