Hey really nice Dude!!
I like the colors sofar and her face!
Still needs some more contrast and shadow. But i think u're not finished yet.
And somehow because that the elbows are too close to the upper body she seems bit stiff.
Or maybe the shoulder are a bit too low?? U should try the pose urself cause if
i put my elbows that close i feel bit uncomfortable. I hope i could help u a bit!
Keep workin dude!!!