Serena, this is great progress. you've really put in time and effort to this and it shows. the dress and her lap area are great my only crits right now are her mouth and hand:
1. the mouth seems a bit short and chubby. the photo seems its thinner and stretches out more across the face.
2. her hand seems a bit small and doesnt line up with the knee..
sinc you havent fully shaded her legs maybe this would be a good time to fix it as best as possible..
this is great work.. keep going, i wanna see this finished - JAG
it's only after you've lost everything, that you're free to do anything..