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Wow looking nice man! if you add more details to this piece it will become great art! But somethin bothers me, i think lighting and specular renedring and volume lighting are missing. Keep it up and dont think you're over yet!
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The concept is great, but the rendering of everything else is killing it. Those clouds are terrible, and the little man looks like Gumby. Your edges are all over the place-- I hate to keep flogging my own thread, but check this out.
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I see alot of potential here. There are a few things that are holding it back. I agree with the others on theyre crits, edges and such. I will add that the clouds aren't helping compositionally. Try to mold them to direct the viewer around the piece, its subtle but will change the piece dramatically. No one is going to know otherwise and it will help a ton!
hummm well done! Eheheh I understand what did you mean with rust, also if I think it's a little different! I like your style and your illustration. Only I have doubt that it's a little too much on the same tone... mah.. maybe it's only my idea! Good work and thank you for your help on my work in progress!
Hmmm.............Looks like you jumped the shark on posting it in finished before it REALLY is finished, since this was just in WIPS yesterday. You took my advice on doing it rusty instead of shiney, however, this is definatly NOT finished. THere is sooooooo much more to do on it. ALOT of potential here. Visit Elwell's thread, then revisit this peice, and finish it. It is looking good, just not living up to it's potential yet.
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All very very good advice...and i will take it and use it. Dragonfire, u r right i jumped the gun. i always tend to do that but this is the furthest i have taken one of my sketches. it may be because i do industrial designs, and am forced to sketch many many fast sketches in a row. so my level of finish is low. this has been fun rendering this though, and i plan to take it further but i will be gone from my computer for the next day but hopefully tomorrow night i can get back at it. damn it...i would rather sit here and just do this all day and night. catch me in the WIP forums and i will be back here with the finished one by friday me hopes!!!!!!!!!!