oooh thats looking utterly brilliant! i love the subtle silhouette in the b/g...fantastic. and plus- that first panel on the last one is just sublime.
4 stars can go suck a cock and die, voted 5
Go with the ol' father-son thingy man, or else your an idiot.
Let yourself run free! Take the new one.
Haha thanks very very much my good sir! N yes, I do agree, that the first one worked out nicely, now I just gotta get them 2 others floatin! Damneth!
hihihihah oh man you didn't have to do that! Thanks thousands though!
Last edited by Orifice; January 27th, 2007 at 04:50 AM.
Great update, man!
the middle picture has got an awesome composition, coool!
the page looks smokin hot brother. especially the first panel , but watch out the shadows the street looks uphill because of them. the texture odn houses looks neat. All hail ash wood. hehe. but I a not getting the feel of a sequence in the second and third panel. maybe an additional inset panel or somethign might help. Definitely 5 stars stuff.
I have serious problems regarding this comic thing. I am real tired of the story I have right now and have a new one. So I dont know which one to choose.
In the first one the main character meets up with his dad and the comic has about 5 pages in blue-ish b/w and a more light-effect-y style. In these pages The character gets alot of story to what has happened and who he is. His dad is someahat of a crook he finds out. N then the comic has a so n so ending, which I could change. Wont tell the end!
The new idea is that ya follow 2 people. Both of them are extremely lonersome and has never met another human being. So these two meet by sercomstance, and together they can overwin their problems. Another thing could be that they battle eachother and the reader get to roote for one of them. Cuz they are kind of opposites. Hector is a city man and is kinda reprecenting fire. The otherone lives out on a big sandy wasteland, has white hair and dark clothes. He is representative of wind.
Both ideas are kinda so n so. The second one seem like the more fun to draw alternative right now... But the first one is more worked through n stuff.
HELP! check the poll at the top of the page. take a fuckin stand man n VOTE! make a change...
Hey man gotta go with a mixture, how about as he is chasing his father, or trying to find him, he meets this opposite of his and they fight, and are really like equals, so both of them, beaten to a pulp by one another, find a new found friendship, or rivalry. The new guy agrees to help find the others father, who by what he knows of is still alive and running around the city.
Not sure what you think of this. The ending sentence kinda sucks, but you can figure the rest out or go with one of the other of your ideas.
Very nice style in here, great stuff
For your comic, i personally like your first version. It would be nice to get some background informations about hector, and the meeting with his father seems a good way to get this in. You don't have to make it that long, so you can have fun drawing other stuff after it. Just my opinion
Can't wait to see more of those pages, keep at it
You have a great handle on form, gesture and all but your digital applications don't retain too much quality. Work on your brushes (I'm sorry I don't have much experience on the computer). Best might be traditional experimentation.
I personally think the second idea sounds cool, two characters to develope, and that house is wicked! Kinda Mad Max feel you know?.. Anyways I don't think you should care about what anybody say, just goes with the one you think will be more fun. Or do both! Two 5-page stories?.... hehe
that picture where you used ref. is awesome! the nose is perhaps a bit crooked as someone mentioned earlier but damn nice. And perhaps try to experiment more with the different brushes! keep up the good work pidde
Just trying to keep this floating... update comin soon hopefully, I've started a new tactic whitch is workin on many pages at a time, so updates will be scattered.
Assoir - Thanks a bunch for your continous support man! N I hope you're right.
Listing - Thanks for coment n crit! Im planning to do more traditionals in the future, but I wont give up the digis, I'll be sure to try to improve the flow n such in 'em.
Bhanu - Yeah, I have gone for that one now. I think it was a good choise. I'll show stuff soon.
Sarcophagus - Yes, the second one it is. Good that ya like it!
Yes, I'll go over the nose again. Hmm, brushes is a mystery to me. I'll try!
the last one is really cool and i like your monsters hrhr.
keep at it
Sarcophagus - Yeah, its up to me anyways, so I guess I'll just take whichever one I like the most! Har har! He looks more badass on the first one by me...
Ben Olson - Thanks for the drop by meng! Hey very glad ya like the stuff!
Them Hale pics sounds very very interesting, I find it hard to find his stuff. So that sounds terrific! Lookin forward to it. Seya 'round!
Haxxor - Thanks piles my man! I'll swing by soon.
Now for a lil' update. Its once again sumthin for the comic. I'll do 4 of these, futuring Hector carrying a dead Skull(oh YES, he is killed of on page 2. haha no one will care.) out from the city.
duuuude, how's things?? Incredible effin' work. The last updates are very nice. I especially like the story telling on todyas update. Reminds me a bit more of comics like sandman.
Thanks for tha nice replies people!
Sarco - Damn. It aint his home and he aint goin in to the city. Sum text 'll explain it when I put the page together. Cool that ya likezit! Update yo SB soon man, this is starting to become bs hehe! Upload the comic stuff why dontya!
Tiger - Things are rollin on nicely I guess. Bussy bussy though... Very glad ya like the sheeh meng!;D Yes, I like how things are comin along right now! I shall just have to look up sandman, think I've heard of it. Thanks for the stopby, I'll visit when things slow down a bit. Or before.
Bendragon - Thanks alot mister! Very glad they please your eye.
One more. Walking through the frying hot suburbs...
damn, this new stylish thing you got going is so rad.
Thanks for showing.
Tiger - Heh, thanks again bud!
Envisor - Thanks so much for likeing! Dont really know what ya mean with culdasac community... Skull is his buddy, the main characters. If ya were wondering?
Heres the last one. I'm happy with me custom hyena sign!