The smoke looks totally dubbed in, which it was, but it shouldn't look like it was.
i know that, but its hard to do smoke, and i did it on a couple of minutes, didnt try really hard, thats just a picture i take, and i started to draw on it, and after half an hour i had that. its not great, but its a good beginning i think.
ET seems to be angry! Very much action! I like it.
But I think SaIiL... is definitely right on the smoke. You should make it look less compact (more diffuse). I really like the way you painted the explosion and the car flying away but I don´t understand why the second car (the one in the front) flies away too. It seems to be too far away from the explosion to get hit that strong.
Btw: Cool topic. I am currently working on something similar (just for fun). So your work is agreat inspiration for me. Thanks!
It's rather pointless to put stuff up here if you're just gonna do things fast and easy. The results will never be good if you do not spend a lot more time on whatever it is you are working on.
ps: The laserbeam should be thin in the distance, and grow thicker as it moves towards the foreground of the pic.
i do spent time, but thats just one that i did fast to see if i could more or less do something that was on my mind, and i posted it so u guys could see it, i think its not bad, its the first time that im doing smoke, so...
i understand what your saying but this is just a job to something greater
I'll rephrase what I said about doing things quick and easy.
Scetches and very unfinished concepts are usually done fast and easy. You first put this in "finally finished", and I made a comment to have it moved to Scetches & works in progress, which it was. However, from what I understood, you viewed this pic as a finished thing.
I hope your next piece will be more thorough. Pics like these can get really interesting