New illustration, Ill get to them colors soon
heres ce sketch
and the finished version
hope you like it!
I like scratch more. Finished is too stiff. Maybe because of lines. Try to use brush with ink.
I agree, even in the first one it would be cool if you could take all that awesome curviness and put it into her body. It just needs to be reworked a bit and it could be great.
I ain't gonna work on Maggie's farm no more.
I personally like a rough picture coloured, this also (well for me anyways) helps me to define my own style. When I draw a lineart picture, I tend to lose the immediate naturalness of the piece.
(probably why I din't pursue cleanup after finishing animation school - it drove me bonkers)
Have a go at some color in your initial rough and see what happens
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when I first saw the sketch, I though she had 3 boobs. But I agree with everone else, the belts in the background should be re-worked to be more curviness.
hey, thanks for the comments! I also went to animation school and now I always have a hard time translating a sketch into a finished piece. The sketch does have more "life" to it, thats for sure
Any ideas for a coloring scheme? Im thinking warm colors