Alright i started this peice with the intention of not changing the medium of usually use which was pencil/paper all the way. It is pretty mcuh time for me to change it up and really get visually creative and involved. So basically the 26 panel peice turned to about 8/9ish panels that are more deeper and tells the story/relates the msg i feel much better. I am incorperating the veiwer in this peice as well as 3-d items to a 2-d peice i intend on using metal,wires fence canvas paper cloth and much more lol The peice involves these topics/themes
-ideal/present 'black america'
here is a basic sketch of the one that is on my wall being worked/skethed there is the shorter one and the one i added to to include a black hawk and crew decending into the part that isn't dest. in black america.
The only issue i have so far is the movement or lack of it lol...alright i have the left to right movement through the use of down wires and beams and all that in the rubble then i have the telephone pole going into the other side of the city and i put another pole to prevent the eye from going off the right side of the peice but i dunno what to do about getting the veiwer out of the right side city and back into the rubble any suggestion and what i could add or if the movement is good as is. I am thinking about moving the smoke more right and fade into the left oh yeah the peice is about 10ft x 3/4ish ft