the finished cybor picture is very excellent I wouldnt change anything in it and nothing pokes my eye, it looks like a very extremely meticulously rendered pinup page for a comic book
I love your other sketches too, my first reaction is that you draw bodies using too stiff straight lines, but then again if you look at my anatomy drawings from mind you will know that i have the opposite problem, should probably aim to draw more like you to be more convicing in depicting human
I love the geometrical approach to faces, actually beginning to learn to see that shape beneath the faces I draw from magasines now will be soon following your example !!!
look I dont know why I love you I just do