I got distracted from doing art for a few years, but this year I decided to really try to get better and make a solid go at becoming professional. At this point in my life it's either do or die, and I would love some help. Here's a piece I've been working on when I'm not busy with commissions, I think I've put maybe 20 hours into it. I'm not nearly finished with it and at this stage I would love some constructive feedback, really any thoughts would be great. Thanks!