The deadline is a great idea guys, really helped push me.
Duunstar: I'm afraid you'll also have to take my advice with a grain of salt since the image is a bit blurry, so I'm not sure if some of the "mistakes" are really mistakes or just blurry camera focus. I think since you're already in a more finalized state, you should definitely push the line weight variation more the foreground elements need bolder lines but it seems the bed has the darkest line. THe areas that have elipses such as the fan and lamp are wonky (circles in perspective is hard ><)
OfficialLamp: It's a bit unfinished to give much critique but I'll try. Line weight variation should be pushed and the picture frame on the left is really slanted.
I'd like to do the two still lives next week, while we are in layout mode.