Hey Callergi, thanks for stopping by in my thread and the criticism. Very helpful!
And about your piece:
Linearts looks much better then full rendered picture. But i guess its just a matter of time you will get to the point both of them would look awesome.
I find lack of focus point on some of the artworks you've done, especially one caught my attention:
"E.O.W Round #181: Centaur Rendezvous Point" - almost everythings rendered in the same way.
I know it was from July and I guess if the tempo is held you've made the progress to cut that error out now, but just sayin.
Those early paintings a bit gluey if you know what I mean, lack of those 'firm shapes'. But again, those are early!
Upload something please!