I originally posted this in my sketchbook but I would appreciate some of your thoughts on improving this design.
This is Romau, the main character for a story/RPG Maker VX Ace game that is in the planning stages called "Epoch of the Brotherhood". It's still a preliminary sketch (just me dicking around with sketchy lines), so some help with the folds would be most appreciated. If not, just your thoughts and impressions would be lovely as well as any other type of assistance.
Obviously, he needs much more...character, if you understand my meaning. I feel I have a decent framework, but lack of detail, originality, and sloppy job with the folds keeps it from shining. Hopefully once I have the basics of the design down I'll research patterns, leatherwork, and sword/armor designs to refine the design.