As much as I love my drawing teacher, he's decided to just sort of sit back and let me work this semester, which isn't helping when I reach a point where I know something's wrong but can't really work it out on my own.
So, a super-harsh crit is really appreciated on this piece. I work better small, but he wants me to push the sizes... so I took the image and tried to fix it a bit in photoshop. I'll put up the original (sorry the photo's a little iffy, it's a large piece, probably about 42'x56'), my digital paint-over by itself, and a comparison. If anyone sees anything wrong with my paint-over or anything that I missed in it, please please please let me know.