Rusty: I love your draw. It's just an idea, but if you want your pose and add some charisma, perhaps you would give her some years.
Kayness : I like your composition. I don't know if you want add some things around your character, but i think his left arm is rigid compared his relaxed face. Your work on your skin is great !
Dragon4lunch: I like your character and colours. Some little things i think you could add: Some straight lines in your clothes and some volumetric effects in your Background as on your character.