3XLT - Nice and clean! I really like the layout on the pages and that's an awesome monster. As I said before, the superhero reminds me a bit too much of Superman but again, that's probably just me.
super skoda - That's just sick...and I like it. Great facial expressions and they match the text nicely.
j.s.sabastian - I like the style and color of this. I'm having a hard time seeing how this goes on to a date but maybe I've just been married too long
waterbird - Great colors and excellent story! Another great monster.
noiion - I like where this story is going and looks forward to seeing the whole thing. For some reason I get drawn back to page 1, it's really good.
I'm a bit disappointed I couldn't do more with mine. Couldn't get the drawings to look like what I had in mind when I wrote the thing. Fairly happy with page1 though. I'm not going to finish it, I'll just move on to do something better for the Alligator girl...