Not sure where I was going with this one. Plenty of things wrong with it, but I had fun giving her a go.
i like her... Phoenix like ?
I'm a manky artist, don't mess with me
Actually i like it.
I can't see anything too obviously wrong with it.
I think that this would look great rendered in a cheesy, bold bright, 60's comic way.
my sketches here... http://conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=92997
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Forge: Once I put her in a kind of spandex costume, I realized that she might turn out to be a version of Pheonix. However, I can assure you that wasn't might first thought as I started the sketch. I may re-think it further.
SEVANS: I appreciate your willingness to give out higher marks on this piece. I am considering coloring her - thanks for the suggestion.
Oh add wings and you'll be fine. Good job keep it up.
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Sok's Sketchbook Thread Last Updated November 25
i like it!
very smooth and it has a classic look to it.
i think the only thing buggin me is her abdomen area, too many lines, and the center line is a bit off at the bottom i think.
I wont fail now