Heres a sketch that I plan on cleaning up and fixing so I can print it on Bristol Board and then add the final line-work. I sketched this out during this past 4th of July weekend at the beach and had tons of fun drawing it. I have been full steam ahead on my children's book so drawing comic stuff for a change was fun. If you have advice to give, go for it. Its only going to make this pin-up stronger before I add the final details.