Last edited by Cyberman; December 1st, 2013 at 10:36 PM.
I have noticed that your drawn has a black trace, as if it was a lineart. I suppose you have done it to guide you while painting the figure.
I have surrounded two places with this black trace with a red line. But there are other points in your drawn with it, as in the superior part of the knight, from one hand to another.
At first, try to remove this line, and check the result.
About the lineart, my first thought was you forgot to remove it. Sometimes I forget also
Now, I have checked the light influence. According to the point 1,4 and 5, I think the light cames from above. But in point 2, besides there no shadow of the book, you have used a strong black surround the piece. In point 3, the shadow is if the light cames from left side.
I talked about the light sources because I didn't know about the divinity of the figure. I simply supposed you were working on the academic way of it.
Thanks for visiting my SB. Did you liked my knights? I did not painted that, because since from the beginning, it was not my intention. It was just an idea of a character for a comic books story. In this moment, I am creating more like that, but using real clothes and weapons. I will post some of these in my SB later, would you like to check it? If you have interest on painting it, let's talk.
I have just another point in your painting. It is about the symmetry of the throne. You painted some details on it, I suppose that it was probably handmade directly in stone. But, as a powerful figure, I think he would like to have the symmetry of these details as much perfect as possible.
OK, thanks a lot... I am finishing a new one, based on Renoir work. As soon as I got it ready, I will send it for you