So, some of you may have seen the earlier version of this. Well, I scrapped it entirely and started from scratch. I tried to follow a lot of the advice that was given to me, however, I feel that the biggest reason for improvement here is the fact that I did an actual pencil under-drawing on paper instead of trying to just do it outright digitally. I got way more dynamic in form and value right away.
Well, tell me where I need to work on stuff (I know the background is blah). Mainly, I'm looking for technique and execution critiques.