Just curious what, if anything, sucks about this. I paid some attention to composition because I have arranged Alesoun (left) together with a historical reference that had been one piece. I separated the angel and baby away from the duck boat. I don't know what folks outside of me think about such a triangular arrangement.
Except for the tone screen that darkens the ground and the water this is done with one dip pen. Should I have change up my nibs to make variations in line width more. If so, how/where. (Well the sky regions were brush and ink. Anything suck about that area?)
Is this kind of allegorical subject matter totally boring, OK, or ?