First off, it's a girl. I've shown it to 3 friends and only 1 thought it's a girl... even though she's intended to look in the middle, I thought I'd get that straight right away.
I'm working on a short story for my comic class final. This is the main character. She's moved to a new city alone to work in her Uncle's warehouse, and helps him smuggle illegal goods inside regular cargo. She rather doesn't care about the laws in that respect. Later on she smuggles certain types of people too, in ways similar to the Underground Railroad.
What do you think of her design versus her set up in the script? Is it in character? I'm trying different colorings too. Which one do you think fits her character more? Thanks for your time in advance!