This is a graffiti I made on the superwall on Facebook, but the program glitched before I could send it. (I like making artwork on the superwall because you can't save it, so it forces me not to procrastinate) So, with a little quick thinking, I took some photos of the drawing before it vanished off the planet forever. I don't yet own a tablet, so I was forced to use a mouse.
I can't edit the drawing (because it no longer exists), but I am still interested in all of your guys' critiques. Hopefully the photo is decent enough that you guys can really tear into it.
And this is my reference. Sorry about the size
Something’s I noticed: in my version the face is too wide, the mouth scars go up too high, and I think his nose might be too small in relation to the rest of the face, but I’m not sure.