No-one else seems to be commenting, so -
Try developing some more. I know these are just sketches, but pick any one characteristic and develop it:
and I think people will be more interested. You don't have to develop more than one of these attributes in a sketch, but it's not really clear what's going on right now. Maybe try practicing some simple forms, because the shading on some of the faces is strange - for example, on the middle one, the highlights are brighter on the cheeks than the forehead, but the light is coming from above.
Sorry if that came out harsh. Probably none of it will help, but I kinda figured that my pitiful comments are better than none at all.
oh, and anatomy. but I guess that's part of form.
Last edited by jkior; September 29th, 2003 at 12:05 AM.