Hello ! I'm starting to color another pic using the crits on kamael. So it's my second WIP here ^^ !
This time i did a complete lineart and made a rough for general tones. I am searching a good lisibility.
I exagerated the spine torsion. It's on purpose but if it appears as a big fault, I will correct that.
I have some doubts too for the second wing's position (yes, the huge black and green thing).
Of course, feel free to criticize any other part...gently
Thank you for your time !