There's a great sense of movement here, but I feel like the foreground should be lighter or darker. It's just kind of sitting there in mid-tone. Maybe if you used a gradient up from the bottom to either pull it forward (lighter) or sink it (darker).
Or you could pull down more of that cold light at the top.
Check this out. Picture's worth a 1000 words, right?
This is the completed painting I did for my friend for his sasquatch movie. At first It was just the mask but after talking I was thinking about it and I decided I would render out the whole sasquatch. This way when I put it up on my website an employer is going to get to see the 5 masks I did and then They will see a completed product that I did witht he mask that was chosen.
Hope you dig it.