daldbaatar its a bit hard to read atm, and i think your train will occupy alot of the image in front there... Might not be the best solution. But i like your three point. But i dont think chinese architecture used this large windows. Go for large open spaces with overhanging roofs.
Earendil some of them was a bit hard to read, but on the last one it reads well. To get a realistic looking 3 point perspective you need to put the VP thats not on the Horizon Line FAR AWAY, the longer away the better