I like the idea. The head seems pretty off-center. It's obvious you were going for the mixed media look, but whatever you used for the hair is just not jiving with the rest of it. Where are her hands?
I think if you were to expand this I would zoom the focus out to show maybe a blank sheet of parchment sitting on a table in front of her or something like that. The idea shows through (but that partly has to do with the thread) but seems a little out of context.
Keep going! I like your style.
The hair was dry brush ink. The composotion happened, because I drew on a small sketchbook and didn't preplan. Thanks for the input.