Dragon Lair... now there was a classic game. Originally, I was going to say that his right hand was pointing at a weird angle, but you fixed that with the update. His face is sort of bugging me. It doesn't look like the dorky, brawny Dirk, but looks more like an arrogant teenager surveying his surroundings.
The pen is mightier than the sword, but the minigun does more damage.
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Other than what Rhythmus already said, the only troubles I can find are that his left arm is too long and his head too small. nice work otherwise.
The shoulder on the left (his right) looks a bit off, not sure if its too far out or too small but it doesnt seem quite right.
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