I originally was going to write it all out, but i think a picture is the best representation of my thoughts. The one part i dislike, even after my suggested edits is your male's neck.. it's just so long..
if you want to stylise this you need to guy further with exaggerating the anatomy, as present you're in limbo which looks off.
Well anyhow, I hope this helps you.
My work: [link]
thank you soo much!!! i'm going to redraw this!! i hate when i know something is wrong but i don't see it.
the height would be about '5'8' the guy was about'6'3'....what is a good way for translating height into a drawing? i read it in my books but i got confused....
Why did you make two topics for two drawings? They're right beside each other.
"Yes, Ms. Flameel?"
"Multiply 47 times 83."
"Multiplication, it's math education! Isn't this swell? Oh, let's give multiplication a standing ovation...
so buy a calculator, study this stuff later!"
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for this video and any other Animaniacs classic!)
i'm sorry i haven't been on in a while your right i should'v just done one topic