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    Thanks for the critiq you left at my SB really appriciated, and you have done some really nice work in here


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    crit

    this image might help.

    In this image there is a foreground a middle ground and a back ground. It uses the strategy of mid ground light. This brings the viewer into the middle of the image. Also the rocks are diminishing in size as they go back which is an easy way to establish space.

    The road in your paintings goes back a little then just drops off. you need to twist it or something so that you can see it progress into space.


    Sketchbook of the Jakhalz

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    Thanks for all the kind word guys!!

    And Sander, thanks a lot for that pic. Its a VERY helpfull one.

    Uhhmm didnt draw much last couple days bcus of study, here´s a speedpainting (30 min):

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    alright no comments... didnt really liked it too, heres another scrap/doodle:

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    wow nice progress since the beginning of the sb!! keep it coming..

    i didnt know you were a year older than me.. sweet dont give up!!

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    Thanks a lot for you comment Reject, but what do you mean by ''i didnt know you were a year older than me''?

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    Thank you for the comment on my sb, I thought I'd return the favor!

    I'd really like to see more studies from you. Still, you've nailed lots of things and have a nice style, so keep it up!

    I'll be watching.
    http://www.sakuhatakka.com/ - image portfolio

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    Hey Spats, thanks for commenting and glad u liked it.

    Would also like to know if the indian is good though...anyone?

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    Hi,

    The indian is cool, solid pose. But i was wondering where the light was coming from? Maybe you can define the form a littlebit more with shadows and highlights to get a more realistic look. But I have to say, if this isn't the style you are going for (more realistic rendering), it's a nice piece!

    PS: Just took another look at the feathers, maybe you could define his feathers on his right a little more?

    Gl!

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    Hey Lyno! Much appriciated your here again. Glad you liked the indian! The light comes from beneath him. Im my mind this indian was standing on a hill while the sun was rising early in the morning.

    And about the feathers, very treu! but I made this one under 30 minutes and saved it and posted it in here. I saw too after looking on site the feathers couldv used more work.. oh well...

    After this feedback I got motivated again and started doing a very detailed project, an old undead. Hope you ppl will like update very soon

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    Sup! A lil WIP as promised... I think its for 30% done
    Every comment is appriciated.

    [deleted wip]
    Last edited by DeJakhalz; April 26th, 2008 at 09:08 AM.

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    Is it bad?? Crits are welcome too !

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    lil update: plz comment or crit, thanks

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    hi

    Lots of nice ideas dude. I took a look in your sb and you have really improved cool to see.

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    Thanks for the nice words man... I try

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