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    Update

    Update on my character design. I first need to finish the shading, after that comes colouring, texturing, background, etc

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    All comments are VERY much apriciated, thank you

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    This one is coming along really nicely. You really have a great imagination.

    Still think that thumb on the right (from us) need some work. Would also prefer a slightly bigger canvas, leaving space around the entire character. Have you decided upon the light source? Seems the upper left part of the torso is a bit dark considering it should be exposed to more light as it is further towards the viewer and that the "hoses" surronding the chest all have a lighter value. May be that you just haven't gotten to shading these parts though.

    Looking forward to seeing the next WiP of this one. Btw, you don't have to answer the PM, I've realized my noob-ish mistake and will delete any "double-posted" images. My apologies. :-)

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    Thanks man!

    The main light source will be from top right on the drawing, and a small one in the left bottom corner. I will probably make the canvas bigger when Im gonna start the background. And about the hands, if you look closely their just roughly sketch at the moment, Ill work on them soon.


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    Update

    Update of the cyborg, all comments welcome:




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    Great progress. Lighting feels much more realistic now and the widened canvas puts more focus on the character. This one is coming along nicely. Will be exciting to see what background you have in mind. Impressive. :-)

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    Thanks a lot man, background Im not really sure about. Just have to be something sinister.


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    I really like how the baby has the umbilical cords kind of floating all around him, just like the cyborg himself is surrounded by the wires. Cool concept, keep it coming!

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    Thanks a lot Crash, Ill upload a newer version today. Will be way better


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    Hey man, where's the new version?

    I really like the how the details are coming along. Not exactly sure what your intentions for this piece are, but I'd like to see a stronger sense of light source/direction. Right now it looks like there's strong light coming from the top, and soft from the bottom, but not all of it even agrees with that. I would say to pick a direction or two and really lock it in. If, of course, you haven't already done that in this new version that's supposed to be up.

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    Im sorry that I havent posted a new update of the drawing, some other really important stuff came up.

    So, not lot of progress, not even fully done with the design of the body yet, but here it goes:



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    Coming along nice! I like the sense of texture you're bringing in to the leg areas, everything seems really cyborg-ish.

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    Agree with crash, think every little development you've made since the last WiP has improved the character even more.

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    Update

    All comments welcome!




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    Ah, beginning of a setting for the char. Exciting. Can't say too much about it though since I'm not sure where you're going with it yet. Looks good so far. :-)

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    wonder how the final will look like
    I feel like the neck is to long, but maybe you want it like that
    Thats up to you! Keep it up! its gonna turn out nice im sure!
    Zet hem op

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    Hey man, I like the level of finish you're bringing the piece to, good work. I'm interested to see how the final turns out.

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    Thanks a lot for all the positive feedback I have gotten. It makes me motivated to really get into this last piece and finish it properly! Soon more


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    Fast sketch

    A fast sketch drawing I did on Photoshop, took me around 30 mins.




    Cyborg is still under construction ^^


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    Some new fast work, this time 2 fast face drawings





    I tried to make as little detail as possible on these ones

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    These last two are especially nice, the hair in the last guy is awesome!

    I like it, wanna see that cyborg finished though

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    I agree with Crash, that last one is sweet. I really like how you've handled it. I think the first one suffers a little because of the heavy-handed lines though. Cyborg?

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    Thanks for the kind words people! Technically, the black haired potrait was 10 times harder bcus I didnt redrawn it over with better lines or something, I just directly drew all the lines.

    The cyborg is coming soon, since you guys were asking bout it Ive just worked on it for a while, and I will soon show the end result.

    Stay Tuned! Cyborg will blow your mind!


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    Really love how you draw the lines. You have a really good foundation when it comes to making your characters/portraits. Still, sketching in PS? Wow that's something I can't do very well.. (only pencils XD). I must admit, I'm also curious to seeing your cyborg as well, the shading is done nicely, really good texture on the cyborg's . The details are astounding, a good balance of detail on the arms and legs as well. Even though the background is still a work in progress, I can't wait to see the finish work on this piece.

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    Thanks Shindragon!

    I didnt had much time because of study, but because you people wanted to see cyborg I will show you. Its not yet done though since I also lost one of my newest versions, but whatever.


    WORK IN PROGRESS:





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    Hey! Finally. I really like the direction your drawing is going. It's starting to look really sweet. One thing, it'd be nice to see some structure in the background buildings. I know you're not done with them, and I'm not quite sure how to explain it. But in previous paintings of yours the buildings and structures look kinda... droopy? I don't know. I assume you were going for an organic look, which did work. Maybe just try to think of them as buildings with purpose and function, that have to hold their own weight.

    You know your doing alright with it when that's the best crit I can come up with.

    Keep truckin'.

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    Thanks for the motivating words, you are right one the background. But thats just a rough concept look and it will also get blurred.


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    Now, that's definitely progress. Like your latest additions a lot. Only concern for me is that it's a little too monocromathique right now, would like to see a little more color for the lighting of the char and structures (but that's my personal taste - always been a sucker for the luminous colors of Royo for instance). Maybe on the "to do"-list? Curious about whether we are in an underwater world or if it's a flying cyborg? Guess that could easily be shown through luft bubbles (if in the sea) or suggestion of clouds in the sky (if on land). Well done anyways, will be exciting to see the next update :-)

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    Sorry for not showing anything lately, I had a lot of stuff to do.

    A little speedy I made (+-30mins) to make up for it



    All comments welcome, keep in mind its a really fast sketch though


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