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    Witch WIP...

    Hi All!

    I'm fairly new and this is probably my first real piece i've worked on since joining. Anyhoo, i know it isn't finished, but i thought i would show you guys what i have so far and get some feedback. Any C&C is always welcome....Thanks!

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    Umm, okay.. is the witch picking up the scythe, which... is behind her? Based on the position of her hands and feet, I'd say she's facing us, but then her torso appears to be in front of the scythe.. *scratches head* I'm confused.
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    hehe, i can see your dilema ....the scythe is tied behind her and her hands are casting a spell. Perhaps if i got rid of the string attached to the scythe and her hands....??
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    Hmm.. that would work

    Or, you could also extend the scythe's handle to make it be in front of her, then get rid of the strings and replace them with "spell glow" (does that make sense?) to show that she's lifting it magically so she can then mow down her enemies in her dark rage -- Muwhahahahah! [*ahem* Sry, little carried away there ]
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    Strings Removed...

    Here's the image without the string to avoid confusion...

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    Better!
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    Thanks! ....Any suggestions?
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    Well, I should point out that her legs are rather short for her body....... and you need some "spell glow", as mentioned above
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    Ok, so i'm now trying my best to put in the tones. Im aware that its not perfect and it all need's to be rendered but i just thought i should show you guys to see what you thought....remember its still a WIP ....

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    Her feet bother me, if you look at a foot from the front you don't just see toes...you see the arch of the bone and ankle. Plus she looks like she's really caught up in the moment, maybe arch her feet almost on her tip-toes or make her floating?
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    will do and your right about the toes....
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