Spirit Yeah those cat things were fun, and yeah, his clothes are very very baggy, tired of drawing stupidly tight clothing :/
Coinpurse Haha not any day soon:/ Thanks man
Jake Never get tired of the pats! Haha not the scanner, was messing around with pencils in photoshop trying to find a way of removing paper texture, Think it was just my crappy pads, ordered 2 moleskins with some of my earnings, can't wait.
Well this piece has had a very very rough relationship with me. I have gone through many stages of hate with it. Its the kind of thing I would have given up on but since it was commisioned I couldn't. Someone wanted some metal gear solid fanart for there room, Partial nudity, was kinda fun, painted straight into colour, though the whole time I felt slightly sad for doing it haha:p.
Anyways thanks to all of you who reply, much appriciated!
Dude.... prrffffff.... that's not even partial nudity.
Don't freak on me for giving you a crit as I've been taking a lot of shit from people on other forums for it and I forget what the deallyo is over on CA.
First let me compliment you on your anatomy. It looks good. I think that the form doesn't come across well on the face. It looks very flat and there are a few issues with her right side of her face. I don't know what though. There just is...
Anyway, talk to you later. Der, I humpd da bump.
Jake Kobrin haha I'll never give you shit for a good crit:p. Yeah the faces values are too flat, all because I'm bad with painting into colour. I'm gonna try and do greyscale underpaintings to get the values down then colour overlay and paint on top of that.
thesadpencil Thank you sir!
Harry_ thanks cuzz, tell me when you set up a sketchbook.
Well this isn't anything special, just some portrait for the roman girl a few pages back. If you are new here check back a page for better stuff
Oh and my moleskins came today so expect more studies and lifedrawings!
Edit: thanks for all the suggestions with this, just added some overlays to try and fix the skin tones, by no means greatly improved just though I might as well update it.
Is that improved?
Last edited by Miles_; March 30th, 2008 at 11:28 AM.
Nice nice so i guess we're working on the same things for now yea am going over anatomy again loomis and bridgemans books god i understand so many new things its like the more you go over the more you learn.
Anywayz i don't know wht the girl is for but if you see on the left side of her mouth where it's shadded in black and grey it looks as if her mouth is swolen
other than that pretty damn good job i suck with digi stuff
this looks pretty solid man keep on pushing those skin tones. the reflection from the nose is kinda wonky it makes it appear as a nose on the bottom of her nose, and gives a semi pryamid feeling. (hope that makes sense) well keep at it man.
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Woah that last one is pretty creepy. I don't know if you intended it that way but the pale skin and dark eyes.... it's creepy.
Mista Delish is right. You should only use white for like a REALLY strong secondary light source. Take a look a look at Cole Eastburns work, he uses white but very sparingly.
I'd like to see you attempt some creatures. Try to keep things well rounded, you know? At least give one of your girls a pet.
Talk to you later!