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    Heya the hair bouncing uwards makes her more lifelike. But her arm seems a lil fat. Ow and btw i do see a difference between 6 months ago . and we updated at the exact same minute how bloody awesome lol. ow and stop moaning you are freelancing at bloody 15

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    Hey man, you've got some really nice stuff here. I've looked through your sketchbook a couple times and always been impressed. It always feels weird to critique someone so much better than me, but here goes. heh.

    In that last piece you're working on two things stuck out to me almost instantly. First, her breasts look like they are made of cardboard. They don't really look fleshy, in your piece they pretty much just come straight of of her clavicle, whereas naturally, they would be hanging quite a bit lower. Second, her leg is boring. It's just a tapered round thing. I wanna see muscles, or at least a graceful leg, more curvy. Right now it just looks a little fat. Besides those two things, it looks pretty good to me.

    Besides that, I have one other general critique. The majority of your characters have almost no facial expression. They're all just semi serious, or slightly amused people with knowing smiles looking of into space or at the viewer. I want to see emotion. Like the woman casting the spell, why is she doing it? What does she feel while she's doing it? Does it require a lot of concentration? Or is it painful? Is she about to take someone out? Her face should be reflecting a lot of that. And it's the stuff like that that can take a simple character painting and make it interesting and intriguing.

    As I said earlier, really nice stuff here. Keep at it and don't draw mindlessly. Oh, and take my critiques with a grain of salt. Hopefully it's at least understandable. Good luck man.

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    A little more expression in her face would be great , anyway, nice update

    ..edit.
    and some shadow in the right side of her face too, also the nose shadow is missing

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    there is definitely some improvement man, but i think you should try a fresh approach to your work, use a different program, try some new brushes and loosen up a bit, i think the reason why you don't see an improvement is because you have been working the same way for months now.
    mix it up!

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    Your definitly one of my favourite artists on this site. I am also 15, and have been drawing all my life.. Only recently I became serious about it though and decided I'd love to make something out of my ability and become a concept artist. though have never done digital since I don't have the money to afford any decent programs such as photoshop, which sucks. I'd love to try it, but for now I can only use my pencils. Don't own a tablet neither.. Your the one who had inspired me to join come to think of it, because I saw your progression and I want the same thing to occur to myself as well.. Going to start a SB soon, so I'm going to thank you for the inspiration.
    Love the last peace btw.. mind teaching me digital if I ever get photoshop?

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    keep on rocking.

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    http://www.conceptart.org/forums/att...9&d=1227648700

    I love this piece!

    Now, PROPS! Dude, big time props! Awesome improvements! You're on your way to monster status if you keep going like this! Awesome. You've inspired me to work harder!

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    This last one looks great, I see improvement since 6 months ago, but most of your pieces are characters from imagination. Maybe try doing a ton of colour studies or life paintings if you want to make a radical change. Keep it up

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    That last character looks really sweet, cant wait to see it done!

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    Whooa cheers guys

    Jordy thanks for the crits man, but there is no point in me not trying to improveand get too comfortable

    Swampdigger thanks man, thank you very much. A lot of very good advice in there. D: Really helped

    Clodioz haha thanks man, where exactly would you place her nose shadow, with lightsources from each side? Do you mean on her forehead?

    markey2D Yeah man, sounds like solid advice. I've been doing a lot of work on an acrylic for art GCSE which I should be able to show sometime coming up.

    NothingButZack thanks man, I'm flattered I'll give you help sure just PM or add me on msn

    archithanks dude

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    SamC yeah I really oughta. Come over for more sessions sometime as well

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    More work on this, Just general tighening up



    REmoved, final a few centimetres down

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    Hey man, good updates as usual
    THe only thing on the last one is the right hand =/ Looks too wide D:

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    thanks cory


    Anyhow, today, um a self portrait from last night, liiines

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    Once again CA's very own SamC from life. Annoyingly I drew the whole thing too far left on the page so its hard to tell that his sketchbook is resting on his knee, and that his shin tucks under the other leg.

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    and a step by step gif, to anyone who may find it helpful, though I kinds doubt that. This isn't my usual approach to a piece but I am interested in relying on photoshop tools less, and more straight to colour approaches.

    Miles' sketchbook- D:

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    well the fact that he's holding a pencil makes it clear that he's drawing, so i wouldn't worry about it too much

    are they done in pencil or what?

    i really like the magegirl, but its a tad confusing because i cannot establish a plane for her to exist on , unless she is floating?

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    your portraits are great.. and the finished magegirl looks cool

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    Dude, great update! I feel like I should at least TRY to leave a critique. I would suggest working on poses. Go to posemaniacs and draw draw draw. Cause looking at the gif I see you twisted the body a lot more then I think you wanted?
    So by studying poses you might learn to nail the pose more or less more accurate in the initial sketch rather than "relying on photoshop".

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    Ha, thanks..
    I'll PM you, and most likely add you if I got anything I need a bit of help on. Thats a really strong self portrait.. the lines are just gorgeous. Keep at it man, your so good.

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    man your looking really damn cool on that portrait a bit older tho...but we havenT seen a photo in a while...if you keep trhat look later the girls gonna run crazy after you xD

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    great job miles!! the hands are bothering me >.< but besides that the mage looks great..

    hey feel free to stop by my sb some time bud.. miss your comments.. :*(

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    Hey miles
    Luving the work bruva
    Lot's of awesome stuff!
    You just keep at it you badass!
    Oh and If I move to london am Gonne hide ontop of your house's rooftop then shoot you with an arrow! fun

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    Sweet progress dude!
    those pencil studies are looking great, nice lines

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    Orange Joe Pencil yeah. Haha yeah I kinda was stupid with that and just made her floating :{

    Quikenobi thanks!

    archi haha ty man

    Hive yeah, you're completely right. I think its time I started to study much harder rather than purely fun work.

    NothingbutZack Thanks dude

    Hygami ha, I wish I was that sexy:p um, it looks quite a bit like me, but its much harder to get a likeness with lines haha

    Reject-D haha, I'llk stop by in a second man =D

    [B]lilnebo/B]lol, nibras, you scare the shit outta me haha. :p

    areve thanks man



    Hmm been workin on this for probably 8 hours now. I had started another piece and it was so so so so bad, it was a relief I kinda like this haha.

    Lots more to do, but I'll post the WIP now. Thanks guys



    Halp with colours please


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    Aye Aye matey. Love the color pallete it's realy good. DUnno about the sprouts dont think they really fit with the piece and that's my only reall critique. Ofcourse some of-proportion anatomy but its wip so I'm sure you'll fix that. Keep on rocking.

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    I've had a look through your sketchthread, and I admire your determination!
    Your improvement is obvious throughout - keep at it!

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    waaa. damn. mate. damn.

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    Yah I luv ya too
    Thats badass!
    You just keep pushing your self and it's awesome!
    Really sweet works man
    Keep at it and post more you biatch!

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    Ah I love this piece. The way she's relying on the rope for support and the snow sortof spraying as if she's slowly slipping, looks really realistic. For colours, I think the sky looks a little too saturated, especially that blue around her waist area. Keep it up man.

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    wow just wow..
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    The colours are gerat, Only thing I can say is that I'd push a bit more the blues on the background, to give it a bit more mist..

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    My envy says hi =D

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