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    Okay, I know this sounds a bit like I'm denying critism but with regards to the black guy (who isn't actually black lol), he was referenced from a police criminal site so he had a pretty messed up left eye. The weird pupil an stuff was intentional. Yeah, tis a bit rushed, I keep seeing more and more areas to improve but I dont think I'll work on them anymore, gets boring if you dont move on. Um, okay thanks for the crits should update more now that I have a proper sketchbook rather than just printer paper. (Don't know why it will make a difference haha.)

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    14....hot dang, this is looking nice. Just a quick crit, take more time on your shading, it will look alot better. Pick up the pencil after each stroke, dont scribble scrabble. Anyways, keep up the hard work! wish I was this good 2 years ago.

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    Thanks Gooq, yeah I'll take more time on the shading for the next piece I do tommorow. Speaking of which it is tommorow here in England. Why am I still up at 20 past midnight. Time to sleep...

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    I love the idea of the first one... But the anaomty seems really funked. But I have alot of troube with drawing that post to. I Also like the faces. especially the bottom one.

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    nice sketcbook, keep updatin

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    my bad, srry about the black guy thing then... that would have been some serious screw up for it not to be intentional!LOL-but even still it looks good

    btw another update for me
    i know u guys r all like, Again???-but i love the crits and there is new material so its worth ur time i promise
    -Taylor

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    Here is a little mid day update.

    Um, right, the first portrait doesn't really look all that much like the person its meant to and actually ended up looking like another, fatter, friend of mine, which was rather insulting to the friend I was drawing.

    Also I decided to try and draw a creature for a change.


    Oh and I might be getting a Hogarth book of amazon so there will be more studies if I do.

    Miles.

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    In the last one, You have treated the creature as if it was a canvas :/

    You must think of the forms, and how it would look in deep-space instead of how it would look on "the paper" ; )

    Keep it up!

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    Yeah Dile buuut..I still like it, so I started colouring it but now I have no idea what to do. Any help would be appreciated.

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    K here is some new drawing and the whole page its on.

    Comment and crit please lads...(and gals)

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    The smile dude is cool! I dunno what to say , that i haven't already said on IM.. anyways, keep at it!

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    thank you for your comment, I will try and get some kinda tutorial done as soon as I can.

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    Here is another character design I drew waaay to late last night (er well actually way to early this morning) hence the overall rushed feeling it was.

    Oh well its not too bad.

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    Hehe the last one looks pretty cool. Although i don't really like the face. His lips are to far down and look a little mishapen making him look slightly apeish. of course thats cool if thats what you were going for! Also I would work on your arm anatomy some more. Sometimes it looks a little odd!

    Overall some cool stuff though! ^_^ Keep it up!

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    Wow u've done alot've art since I last checked... cool stuff, I really like you armor designs they are all diferent but all are very cool, especiall that last one!

    However the belt and down all seem a little flat like his outfit just has design that are sowed on to his pants and are on the same plane... does that make sense?

    But then again the pose has a very relaxed feel and conveys great calm emotion so overall its some very origonal, inspiring nice work!
    Keep it up
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    Yeah about the flatness I do actually know what you mean. I started by sketching in some basic shapes for the armour and just decided to keep them falt like a kind of muscle suit, if you know what i mean. I you don't then...bleh.

    Update later tonight probably.

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    Update!

    Um yeah the drawing is kinda generic, gas mask scuba diving ninja, haha. Highly inspired by metal gear solid 2. Great game.

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    Dude, draw brighter lights and darker shadows. Make higher contrast, it looks very flat now

    And your prespective is worng. Look how you drawed shoulders

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    I do agree with the perspective comment...

    When you are drawing your boxes you need to really make sure that they are in perspective.... alternatively your characters need to be in perspective too, although it may be harder for someone else to tell because of their organic shapes.

    I would recommend drawing a few cubes and other simple forms in perspective to help you understand it a bit more...

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    Yeah to be honest that last drawing wasn't really all that good I just thought I better post something today...

    In fact, its awful..ignore it..

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    idk...i kindve like it..but keep at it man
    ohh and for the record my update was worse, my guys hairline looked like a unibrow...lol

    its a nice concept that could use a little refining
    and about how it looks flat just give each item (like the belts) its own individual shading so that it looks different from the rest.

    That should help...
    oh ya it weas nice chatin on msn! keep it up
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    I don't think its generic at all! Looks awesome to me. I think you need to fic the right leg. Looks a little funny. Other then that its way awesome!

    BTW I updated my SB And I would love to know your opinion ^_^

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    The shading on the last one is weird to me.. It goes in all kind directions and it doesn't really make a lot of sense ... Work on it, and push the contrast more, your stuff is a bit dull thanks to the rendering.. and yeah, i think you could improved it a lot by adding contrast to it..

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    I am going to mirror everyone else now and say the shading does look a tad weird.... you should definitely work on contrast...

    Also you should color more! it will help you with shading and contrast!

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    Yeah I increased the contrast and tweaked the pic a little. It looks a bit better but to be honest its not all that good anyway. I'll scan it in if I update later.

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    Will be waiting

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    Yeah, I tweaked it a bit but it still doesn't look very good. I'll draw something else later to update. Been a bit of a lazy day. I can't do much at the moment cos I have a karate lesson so I might not update till tommorow.

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    Okay here's a new drawing I started some tie on thursday evening. Its alright but doesn't resemble Bruce Lee all that much. Not really enough drawing for two whole days.

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    Something wrong with eye and nose. Eye could be becourse of perspective.

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    Haha, it all comes back to perspective eh? I wont change it now cos its alread been rendered, just need to work on it for future drawings.

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